Shadowstrike
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Roleplayer V
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Post by Shadowstrike on Feb 15, 2015 20:46:50 GMT
If your unwilling to comply with the needed changes then I will simply prevent you from rping until you comply. As an admin I'm given permission to revoke someone's access to rping if their bio is found to have issues that where originally not picked up when first approved.
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Raiza
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Decepticon
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Post by Raiza on Feb 16, 2015 14:57:15 GMT
Excuse me, shadowstrike. I may not be staff on the site but I have helped Thunderwave on his application a little bit. And towards no offense, I am sure English is probably his second or third language learned due to grammar and English. But I hope this helps you out to understand.
Kind Regards, Avacon Raiza (Cybertron Sirens)
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Detective Ulti
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Master Detective / 'Pun of the Year' Award Winner
Neutral
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Post by Detective Ulti on Feb 16, 2015 15:57:55 GMT
You still need to lower your tech-specs (Limit is 60 max) and you need to edit your weaknesses. Optimus Prime is not a proper weakness. You need an RP sample. It may also help too if you do some editing to your history, but you can leave that section as you want, the history is only a suggestion.
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Post by Skyspray (Aquahaze) on Feb 16, 2015 18:13:17 GMT
Please update your application to fit the current one. Oh, and your tech-specs are a little high. I would also like some more information about the strengths and weaknesses. A sentence each.
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Post by Skyspray (Aquahaze) on Feb 16, 2015 20:45:07 GMT
The tech-specs are too high. 60 is the max amount and you are over 70. And i do wonder why "being alone" is a weakness....
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Vampyricon
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Autobot
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Gender: Male
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Post by Vampyricon on Feb 17, 2015 8:39:48 GMT
Weaknesses : - Being alone, which i hate. [He can be easily killed when alone]
- getting shot in the back, which i also hate [1 hit kill in the back]
- snipers, which i hate the worst [1 sniper shot? Dead]
- Running at Autobots [It's all relative, running at Autobots, Autobots running at you.]
Conclusion: Courage and Endurance stats are too high
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Thunderwave
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Junior l
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Gender: Male
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Post by Thunderwave on Feb 17, 2015 21:27:46 GMT
ok
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Shadowstrike
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Roleplayer V
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Post by Shadowstrike on Feb 21, 2015 18:12:57 GMT
What type of cloaking is it he uses is this magical Harry Potter style or more realistic reflection of light Preadator style.
What exactly does the sonic pain wave do? The ability to destroy armies with a single attack is too overpowered/godmodding.
Armor that can't be pierced through falls into the category of overpowered/godmodding.
Armour description is looking for noticeable features such as whether it's heavy or light.
Nucelon Shockcannon can't be a promised one hit kill weapon as that falls into overpowered. Just describe the weapon such as how it fires ect.
What are the security cams and bomb detination?
Why is the sword on fire. Are the sword and battle axe using thermo energon?
When describing their personality "fantastic" is not a valid word rather it's a mary sue term. In addition "you can't stop Thunderwave, he's too strong" has nothing to do with personality.
History has a number of issues specifically dark energon as it is a restricted item, if you want to use dark energon you need to request it and give a valid reason to possess it.
As said already for strengths Dark energon can't be used without permission.
When you say it protects you from fireblast what exactly do you mean?
Already brought up the issues with cloaking and sonic painwave so far.
So how exactly does his armour work is it shot multiple times then disappears?
Who is his pet, lord and master?
So he can be overemotional?
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Post by **Sanjay Harvey** on Feb 21, 2015 18:22:59 GMT
I don't think dark energon is fully or ever was allowed in this site.
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RoundUp
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Autobot
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Post by RoundUp on Feb 23, 2015 23:04:37 GMT
I'd suggest listening to the moderators and what's being asked of you. Make sure you also tell them you've made the changes by posting on this thread.
Dark energon is banned afaik
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Thunderwave
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Junior l
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Post by Thunderwave on Feb 24, 2015 0:13:44 GMT
oh i thought dark energon was allowed sorry
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Sinn
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Roleplayer II
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Post by Sinn on Feb 24, 2015 0:25:44 GMT
The rules are your friends. Reading them will make this oodles easier.
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Thunderwave
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Junior l
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Post by Thunderwave on Feb 24, 2015 0:40:50 GMT
i know that
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Sinn
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Roleplayer II
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Post by Sinn on Feb 24, 2015 0:50:22 GMT
And yet you still have things that blatantly contradict the rules, or just don't make sense. Maybe you should review them?
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Post by Supernova Mavrix on Feb 24, 2015 10:39:24 GMT
If I were you Thunderwave, I'd take in what these ladies and gents are advising you, I know some of them myself (Yes this is Earthshaker from the former TFU RP to those who know me) and what they're trying to do is only help you so you can get stuck in with the RPing mate.
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Post by CallMeAst♥ on Feb 24, 2015 13:32:06 GMT
hey she approved it so sorry. Alas I did, and it was a bad call from myself. Unlike most applications had had approved in the past, this one was one of the few that I most regret approving. I'm sorry Thunderwave, but your application has been bumped back down to the 'Under Construction' Status, and with that, your ability to RP as this character. Until you make the correct readjustments to your profile, you won't be able to RP. Hence, this application has been Denied.
Have a good day - EG-CPT_Astrinal
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Thunderwave
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Junior l
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Post by Thunderwave on Feb 26, 2015 0:02:53 GMT
ty and plus it was revoked
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Thunderwave
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Junior l
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Post by Thunderwave on Feb 26, 2015 21:48:26 GMT
i have rping exprience in real life called being me
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Post by CallMeAst♥ on Feb 27, 2015 1:39:34 GMT
Have you made the corrections yet?
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Post by Gearchange on Feb 28, 2015 2:03:25 GMT
Please can you notify us on the thread that you've made the changes, I know PMING a mod saying you've changed the thread, but I'm not currently looking through apps.. it'd make it easier for others to look through it.
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