Thunderwave
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Post by Thunderwave on Jan 23, 2015 22:04:30 GMT
BASICS
Designation : Thunderwave Nicknames: Thunder Gender : Mech Age : 17 million (in Cybertronian years) Home Planet : Kaon, Cybertron Faction : Decepticon Occupation : Deystroyer Abilities : CloakingAbility Description : Cloaking is Invisiablity (in case if nobody knows what cloaking is and you literally can't see Thunderwave. Iinvisibilty like off of Harry Potter) that lasts for 10 posts and it takes 10 posts to cool down and recharge.
APPEARANCE
Optic ( Eye ) Color : Red Primary Paint Color : Gold Secondary Paint Color : Green Third Color : Silver
Height: 40 Features:transformersprime.wikia.com/wiki/Titan?file=Autobot_Titan.jpg (but as a decepticon titan) Alternative Mode: War for Cybertron destroyer tank mode. It has a badass look to it. Also it has two tank barrels that shoots out plasma, and its color is gold, green with a silver outline. Has big treads to travel on all terrain. It is very bulky type build. -IMG or GIF HERE-
ARMOR AND WEAPONRY
ArmorArmor Description: Durabyllium that is almost impregnable heavy and strong to protect from heavy damage like explosivesArmor Perks : heavy x5, thickness x5 Weaponry There are a bunch of weapons listed here
Primary Weaponx18 scrapmaker Description: has a galtling gun look and rotation that shoots 100 bullets per sec Secondary Weapon :Ion cannonDescription: this cannon is similar to Bumblebee's that shoots plasma at 3mph Other Weapons : Emp Gernades Description : It is covered with Cybertronian symbols and short timer. Gadgets :Black hat (from C.O.D.), Bomb detonator, Detpack. Melee : Thermo Energon Battle Ax, Thermo Energon SwordMelee Weapon Description : Both covered with Cybertronian symbols that has and red orange glow to it.
TECH SPECS
Note: This is based off a 1 to 10 scale. One is the lowest, then is the highest.
LIMITED TO 60 POINTS TOTAL.
Strength : 9 Intelligence : 8 Dexterity : 5Speed : 3Endurance : 5Firepower : 9Accuracy :4Melee :5 Tech Skill :6
OTHER
Personality :Thunderwave is strong, bold, brave, a get-to-know type of con. Always looking for some friends top hang out with. Thunderwave always listen to his master and lord. Thunderwave doesn't like Vehicons Because their always dumb. Thunderwave is never scared to take on anyone that poses a threat to him. Courage: 7Charisma :3 History : Thunderwave was created to be one of the guardians of Crystal city and was best friends with Deadlock, who is now Drift. Thunderwave was captured by the Decepticons and was taken as a prisoner. Thunderwave decided to join the Deceptions after his release from being tortured, and took action against the Autobots. Thunderwave was captured again for wanton destruction on Iacon city near the Stellar Galleries. Thunderwave tried to escape at any means necessary, only to fail. Thunderwave was freed by Nemesis Prime and the two engaged into battle against Zeta's army. Thunderwave then took off in a planetary escape pod, to find the knights of Unicron, but was called away by Shockwave's signal on earth. Family : NoneStrengths : MINIMUM of four bullets ( Full sentences required ). You may also write a paragraph consisting of five sentences revolving around 'strength'. - His Strength can pick up heavy objects to provide cover. - His tough armor helps him stay protected from fire blast and resist damage. - His Cloaking helps him hide from enemy scouts. -His Endurance helps him through many battles. Weaknesses : MINIMUM of four bullets (Full sentences required). You may also write a paragraph consisting of five sentences. (Must mention five weaknesses) - His armor may help him from damage, but it doesn't last long. - His ego can be small if brought down. - His emotions can effect him if they get hurt. - His weapons fire can disable his cloaking.
SAMPLE RP
Note that a piece of your history, your journey to Earth for example, could be used.
After leaving Cybertron, Thunderwave searched for the knights of Unicron. "Its been four stellarcycles in deep space, since I was rescued from the Autobots and still continue my long journey to find the knights of Unicron." A transmission appeared on the screen "This is Shockwave, I'm sending this transmission to anyone who's out there, we have taken place here on Earth in search for engeron." Thunderwave turned the ship towards earth. "I'm coming for you." He said to himself. Thunderwave crash landed the ship at an unknown location. "Hmm, the damage reports state that the ship is repairable." Thunderwave grabs his X-18 Scrapmaker, Ion Cannon, Thermo Energon Battle Ax, Thermo Energon Sword, and his Emp grenades. A ship came from nowhere and picked up Thunderwave, was given a room.
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Post by CallMeAst♥ on Jan 26, 2015 23:27:38 GMT
Denied
I'm sorry, But I can't accept this. Nothing is filled out properly, or it is simply to Overpowered. The name of the character itself simply breaks the rules for the RP.
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Thunderwave
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Junior l
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Post by Thunderwave on Jan 26, 2015 23:30:03 GMT
aw man
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Thunderwave
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Junior l
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Post by Thunderwave on Jan 26, 2015 23:31:48 GMT
well how do i make it better?
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Post by CallMeAst♥ on Jan 26, 2015 23:33:40 GMT
By reading the application rules, reading the minimum requirements, which is listed in the Template Thread..
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Thunderwave
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Junior l
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Post by Thunderwave on Jan 26, 2015 23:34:27 GMT
ok.
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Thunderwave
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Junior l
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Post by Thunderwave on Jan 26, 2015 23:37:08 GMT
Minium of 5 sentence on what?
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Thunderwave
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Junior l
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Post by Thunderwave on Jan 26, 2015 23:53:15 GMT
where's the template thread at?
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Post by CallMeAst♥ on Jan 27, 2015 0:34:19 GMT
Where you copy the BBcode for the application......
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Vampyricon
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Autobot
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Post by Vampyricon on Jan 27, 2015 14:24:32 GMT
You might want to read this and here are the templates.
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Thunderwave
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Junior l
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Post by Thunderwave on Jan 29, 2015 0:21:46 GMT
i see now
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Post by CallMeAst♥ on Jan 29, 2015 3:02:11 GMT
Okay, off to editing....
You need to re-accommodate your specs to the new version. Please check the update thread (seen in news feed).
You need weapon descriptions.
MOre in the armor description, APPEARANCE description, alternative mode.
You need a sample post, which is a minimum of three paragraphs.
And content wise, please don't affiliate, mention, or use canon characters in your history. You also need to alter the name so it isn't 'Megatron'-ish.
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Post by CallMeAst♥ on Feb 3, 2015 0:25:51 GMT
Please update your application to the new one. Here's the link
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RoundUp
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Autobot
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Post by RoundUp on Feb 7, 2015 2:18:30 GMT
Doesn't this character seem a little op and undetailed?
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Post by Gearchange on Feb 7, 2015 2:19:56 GMT
I think there needs to be some major alterations to this character.
A tank with speed 9 and a height of 60ft does not add up properly.
Tech Specs are a little too high and there's little detail involved.
I know you may be using a phone but there is a desktop version of the site for phones (located at the bottom of the page.)
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Thunderwave
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Post by Thunderwave on Feb 12, 2015 0:22:18 GMT
i'm using a desktop
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Thunderwave
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Post by Thunderwave on Feb 12, 2015 0:22:44 GMT
plus speed is 8 not 9
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Sinn
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Roleplayer II
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Post by Sinn on Feb 12, 2015 6:00:27 GMT
So the 60-ft tank is zipping around at mach 2 instead of mach 6. Well, that's a big relief....
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Shadowstrike
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Post by Shadowstrike on Feb 15, 2015 20:38:13 GMT
BASICSDesignation: Thunderwave Nicknames: The scrap maker, The phenom, The ex-ruler of the web Gender: transformer Age: 14 million Home Planet: Cybertron, Kaon Faction: Decepticon Occupation: warrior APPEARANCE
Optic Color: red Primary Paint Color: gold Secondary Paint Color: green Third Color [Optional]:silver
Height: 60 ft Build: bulky Describe your Character’s Build [Ex: Bulky, Light]
Alternative Mode: A gold and green and silver tank -IMG or GIF HERE-
ARMOR AND WEAPONRY Armor: TransformuimWeaponry Primary Weapon: mini gunSecondary Weapon: ion cannonOther Weapons: Battle ax, Flamming sword,emp gernadesOther Weapon Perks:ion cartige, recoil Gadgets:cloaking and sonic pain wave Melee: Battle ax, Flamming swordMelee Weapon Perks: x5 damage and x5 shield disortination TECH SPECS
[Note: This is based off a 1 to 10 scale. One is the lowest, then is the highest. To ensure nobody is super-duper powerful, there will be a limit of points you can use on your Tech Specs. This will apply to all but the rank stat.]Strength: 9Intelligence: 10Dexterity: 5Speed: 8Endurance: 7Courage: 9Firepower: 8Accuracy: 4Melee: 9Tech Skill: 10Charisma: 9Rank: Leave blank, this is determined by the faction leader. OTHERPersonality I served the Decepticons since the info about them was out. I took out 50 autobots with one bullet from my creation that failed( which is a modify warp cannon). I'm like Soundwave but different. I can hack into hardcore stuff, but Megatron had chosen Soundwave instead and I don't like to be disturbed. History: Once I was created i was known as thunderclash the ruler of the web. Until Soundwave was created then he bcame the ruler of the web. I can Combine into bigger transformer. After i joined the Decepticons, I was ordered to spy on the Optimus Prime for information. After gathering all the info i headed back to base to report to lord Megatron. Megatron was pleased to get the info when Soundwave was gone. When we launched in the Nemesis (a.k.a Trypticon) to heard for earth. And now I bring you this message for those in the future.Family: Thunderwave doesn't have a familyStrengths:-hacking - killing autobots - expieraments - talking to Shockwave - Hacking into soundwave's twitter account Weaknesses:- Being alone - getting shot in the back - snipers - Optimus Prime SAMPLE RP Having looked over this bio I'm revoking rping, this character is too tall for a tank which should be around 28-34ft. In addition the tech specs are too high and the strengths and weaknesses do not appear to be seriously thought out so they need to be redone. Furthermore you need to fill out a sample rp. This can be anything you desire.
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Thunderwave
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Junior l
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Post by Thunderwave on Feb 15, 2015 20:41:25 GMT
hey she approved it so sorry.
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