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Post by Feenixfire Lockheart on Apr 9, 2016 20:16:01 GMT
*Appears on the plot board as I have never posted my own little plot together on here before.*
Hello everyone, I just wanted to post a plot/warning that I have been working on for the last few days and I really just wanted both opinions and to give warning to my fellow troops.
So as everyone now knows, Feenix has very seriously injured in the Battle for the Thames in the London Thread and as such in a semi-concuss state in the medbay at the moment.
Now I admit myself, my own character has completely lost her way in life. The stresses of everything has finally got to her and humiliating defeat in London was the cherry on the cake of robot mess. Before anyone says or suggests anything, I AM NOT RESIGNING AS PRIME!
So instead I want to do some character development and help Feenix get back to her roots.
My plan is as follows: 1) Have Feenix wake up from the operation and realise her face now looks as if someone has made swiss cheese out of it, even with the doctors doing all they can. 2) Gearchange makes the mask for her cause she refuses to go out in public with what she sees as an ugly face. 3) Feenix orders Gearchange, Skyspray and Brusier to get a team together to become the next Elite Guard. 4) Feenix leaves the base without notes or warning. 5) She travels around the world looking for guidance from outsiders she knows. 6) She goes searching for Watchman. 7) Finds him in the Abandoned theme park and talks to him. 8) Katrina (Feenix's sister) arrives and sees this and they start fighting....
Thats all I got so far. I am thinking of starting this next weekend or the weekend after. I am also looking for opinions and suggestions and what she should do too. I am also unsure if this is a closed off rp or one anyone can join with permission.
Thanks!
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Post by Shadowstrike on Apr 9, 2016 20:54:54 GMT
Personally I'm curious what is the purpose of this storyline, do you have a goal in mind. It would make suggestions easier to give if we had a focus to narrow our thoughts on.
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Post by Gearchange on Apr 9, 2016 21:46:42 GMT
I believe that the outsider in question would probably be Baku, a character who was very much keen to stay neutral on the war, but since the events at DC it would be interesting to see how his opinion has been swain.
Also it seems like a test of the new command, forming ranks within the Autobots.
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Post by Backbeat on Apr 9, 2016 22:37:39 GMT
It's good to know that Primal will not fall easily...
And this will also buy me the time I need to complete the preparations for my plan... While you have your adventure of self discovery, I shall regain the time I have lost due to outside interference... That's right... OPERATION INSANITY PLEA is still on the table!
Also, welcome the the face-mask that hides hideous damage club!
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Post by Feenixfire Lockheart on Apr 10, 2016 5:12:44 GMT
Shadowstrike The purpuse really is to have my character feel worthful again, for the last few months she has felt like she hasn't been worth a thing to anyone and has lost everything that made her unique. She more or less feels like a slave to the Autobots that has little to no help when she requests it. So the goal is self discovery and to remind the bots that she won't be around all the time. Gearchange you have summed it up nicely. Actually Backbeat, some of this is your fault too xD You have drove Feenix insane, like fully insane. XD Thanks.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2016 6:34:51 GMT
*Gets blue gladiator in the scene*
Apparently after the meeting in UK Feenix has someone to fight.
My plans about Scary as a extermination of pseudo religious followers of 'Primus' will stand and her revenge against the cybertronian race would just feed her hate. But Scary will become into a monster, in the should be the creator of such monster attempting against the sons of Cybertron.
*Shows green doritos] CAtetron in*
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Post by Backbeat on Apr 10, 2016 17:57:19 GMT
Shadowstrike The purpuse really is to have my character feel worthful again, for the last few months she has felt like she hasn't been worth a thing to anyone and has lost everything that made her unique. She more or less feels like a slave to the Autobots that has little to no help when she requests it. So the goal is self discovery and to remind the bots that she won't be around all the time. Gearchange you have summed it up nicely. Actually Backbeat, some of this is your fault too xD You have drove Feenix insane, like fully insane. XD Thanks. Well looks like I win!
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Post by Lord Death Wish on Apr 13, 2016 16:43:28 GMT
My only suggestion would be using this opportunity to get more people involved, this as it stands just looks like you are RPing with he same people that Fee has for the better part of the last three years.
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Post by Feenixfire Lockheart on Apr 14, 2016 15:46:14 GMT
Well I am more than open to have other people come in! I would love to have more people involved! If you are interested in taking part then please post here and we can plan something!
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Post by Shatterbeam on Apr 14, 2016 18:27:26 GMT
With more medics like Bael and Empress, I can finally take a break from being a medic. I'd love to get Shatterbeam into this.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2016 23:02:17 GMT
I have to say you have only considered the autobots in your plot, but where is the place to the villans?
I'm tired of the 'cons who fight because YOLO' If it is possible lets try to find an interesting way to get decepticons involved, and I find this as a good oportunity to do it.
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Post by Backbeat on Apr 17, 2016 7:26:01 GMT
I have to say you have only considered the autobots in your plot, but where is the place to the villans? I'm tired of the 'cons who fight because YOLO' If it is possible lets try to find an interesting way to get decepticons involved, and I find this as a good oportunity to do it. I always figured this is where I step in and start some insane plan they don't know about... The villains have free reign to do as they please... We know the Autobot's plan but they don't know ours!
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Post by Feenixfire Lockheart on Apr 17, 2016 19:38:01 GMT
Maybe Backbeat puts up a bounty on Feenix or offers a high up job? I am not sure myself as the Decepticons aren't my usual dealings when it comes to commands.
Shatter you are more than welcome to join in! Maybe an EG member or trying to find feenix.
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Post by Sparkflare on Apr 18, 2016 22:07:28 GMT
I would quite like to get on this myself. Either as one of the new members of the elite guard or the person that would be able to fix Feenix's face after this story arc is over or at a later date (if you wish for Feenix's face to be fixed that is) as Sparkflare has a history of the Cybertronian equivalent of a cosmetic surgeon.
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Post by Shatterbeam on Apr 18, 2016 23:40:51 GMT
Thank you Feenix. I'd prefer am EG member, since I'd likely look for Feenix regardless. If not, then it's all right. But it would be fun.
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Post by Backbeat on Apr 18, 2016 23:45:47 GMT
Maybe Backbeat puts up a bounty on Feenix or offers a high up job? I am not sure myself as the Decepticons aren't my usual dealings when it comes to commands. Shatter you are more than welcome to join in! Maybe an EG member or trying to find feenix. I already have my plans...
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